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Woozey the Writer

  • Poetry » Other, General Re: Intrigue

    Hey. This was a good read. I found the secret message clever and entertaining. The poem itself flowed well until certain points (which have already been pointed out.) Try to ...

    Jul 30, 2010
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: Cinderella?

    Hi. I have just one thing to say about your poem-Wow! It was beautifully written and gives a deliciously dark twist on the much-loved, if a little worn out, classic. ...

    Mar 17, 2010
  • Poetry » Other, General Re: Wonders

    hi. I am now going to try and write you a review, but, don't worry, it's only due to the ratios. Your poem was...interesting! It was good, no doubt, but ...

    Dec 2, 2009
  • Poetry » Other, General Re: Christmas Day 1914

    I loved your poem! :) It was very interesting. I knew what the subject was originally, so it made me smile. I particulary liked your reference to 'Toms' and 'Jerry'. ...

    Dec 2, 2009
  • Poetry » Other, General Re: And so they fade...

    Hi. I really love your poem :) It was a little confusing at the start but, in the end, it was clear. I think you should change the last line ...

    Dec 2, 2009
  • Poetry » Other, General Re: The adventures of the geek.

    Hi. I liked your poem. It rings true to the life of a 'geek' and I love the title! It's inticing! Now I'm in a bit of a catch 22 ...

    Dec 2, 2009
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: I Hurt To Love You (revised)

    Hi. Your poem was beautiful! It reminds me exactly how I felt when me and my boyfriend were going through a rough patch. Was it based on you? You need ...

    Dec 2, 2009
  • Poetry » Other, General Re: Just Leave.

    Hi. I thought your poem was good! It reminded me of how I feel during Maths (which is 6th period today! :-() and Not a graze on her steely frame ...

    Nov 18, 2009
  • Poetry » Narrative, General Re: Calling All Heroes

    Hi. Your poem had really strong imagery. It was a powerful poem with strong emotions. I perseved the boy as a teenager who is in a downward spiral and can't ...

    Nov 14, 2009
  • Poetry » Lyrical, General Re: Sunday Solitude

    Hi. I liked your poem. I think that your poem isn't about a loved one as it first seemed, more of a object...or himself? That the 'prize' is on his ...

    Nov 14, 2009
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: Dead Among the Monkey Bars

    Hi. Your poem was good, I enjoyed it. Although, me and my nan saw it as two different things. Me, a child now grown up and looking back on his ...

    Nov 14, 2009
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: Dried Apricots

    Hi. I loved your poem. It sounded like an odd-ball from the title but, when I read it, it was good! It had me rembering stuff that brought back memories...even ...

    Nov 3, 2009
  • Short Story » Romantic, General Re: The Accidental Run-In

    Hi. I'm now going to write you quite a long review as the ratio has just gone up...damn, that's annoying! Your story was good. Quite a lot of sentences that ...

    Nov 3, 2009
  • Poetry » Narrative, General Re: Pain Forever Gone

    Hi. I liked your poem.You can tell it is true. Sorry it is, whatever happened. I got a little confused on why she left him, who he was and what ...

    Nov 1, 2009
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: a rose for the abused..

    Hi. I loved your poem. It was vivid and clear. It was also subtle yet at the same time, hard hitting. The 2 by 4 doesn't seem to be the ...

    Nov 1, 2009


I have lived through much, and now I think I have found what is needed for happiness. A quiet secluded life in the country, with the possibility of being useful to people to whom it is easy to do good... then rest, nature, books, music, love for one's neighbor - such is my idea of happiness.
— Leo Tolstoy